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我试着从Duff的英文版转译过来开头几段。这个本子比Rowe和Ridley的都要新,读起来稍微顺一点。翻译的时候尽量带上韵脚,其实史诗本来就气势磅礴,浑然天成,韵脚反而有胖脚之嫌。这里只是游戏之作,为你捧捧场。3 x" H# g1 p4 Q
& ?( ]: W; I5 I+ v伐刹利阿2 R o0 L+ J9 N% c+ M! r6 ^
* L; _; p% d" }" g% A6 t我所吟唱的战争,/ B; n8 K$ u2 M
在埃马提亚原野; O0 B( V! @: s
何止是兄弟相残,
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听我为你们叙述,
$ ~1 u/ ^ T+ ~, C一个伟大的民族,9 E- g \8 |/ y/ s% z, H2 @2 N) ~
竟把胜利的右手,
3 ]' B7 x/ I% g# x扼向自己的肺腑;
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5 {7 F1 p, A* t1 U y) w巨头协议已撕裂,/ f: u9 y! l* d9 v
世界在震荡瓦解;
; g% E+ `3 u5 q- M2 v2 C6 n; B骨肉间拼力厮杀& [2 q0 J- j6 u F- Z7 h
沦落到罪人之列。5 z+ U, }9 D$ o( d, R) b5 \- @
$ f: t8 a. ?4 k$ S J& ?同样的军旗,+ X7 m* d' i' e5 I. {# j
同样的鹰徽,
" l3 }; I. e/ Q+ s/ F1 h! v+ g还有同样的投枪,
* a- b& H/ _6 U0 j" H N' b% m# i却是交战的双方。7 x) s0 O+ o- j$ M1 `% c$ v
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我的国人们啊,
! f1 g/ ~& ^4 E! F" J3 B你们的淫祀如此放浪8 {" ]0 ~0 i3 \ b
以屠杀作为献祭
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克拉苏游荡的冤魂,% ^2 n& a* x1 R6 f; V0 z' @
为他复仇者何人?; z# V! Z* |8 @, t* {3 {( R
你们本该扫荡巴比伦,
8 f# L! g3 L; O) t夺回来自意大利的战利品!( t+ N6 X$ \( ^/ w- d/ F
4 s! L. t0 S! u1 j你们却向敌国展现,5 q$ p4 [. F' C8 Q, j1 w. g8 d
罗马人血泊的奇观;
5 s" E2 v c/ @纵然赢得了战争,
1 u0 M, l& E% g1 y0 J: j也绝不会有凯旋。/ W; U2 l' d' A2 p
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罗马人手中的鲜血,& ]. d k3 C! w- R$ {
本应换得多少土地和海洋:* w; v- ] h, U8 M, H- s' z( R
从太阳升起之处,! W! {# a" m1 u: P8 Q; V1 ?7 w
到星辰隐入夜幕的地方;# A6 ^6 e/ g+ s- O* D
从暑气灼烧的南国,% a& x9 U% |0 Q) d
到那锁住春天,
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" T# t( `7 X- a: O* S: C% HOf war I sing, war worse than civil,& I; T" B) B( h1 u! S7 q2 P- ^
waged over the plains of Emathia,( L! @* A, T) @# s
and of legality conferred on crime ;
% u( J& }8 e, k I tell how an imperial people
/ F2 ^& h9 x4 k6 \/ h1 Y1 tturned their victorious right hands against their own vitals ;
% f: t, {# r# ?7 {; `! y/ J2 Show kindred fought against kindred ;
8 G, q5 W( F* ?' m+ A7 thow, when the compact of tyranny was shattered, p! W0 [+ P: ?# `, ^9 E
all the forces of the shaken world contended
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how standards confronted hostile standards,
: N, U# G" l: h4 Xeagles were matched against each other,
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What madness was this, my countrymen,
2 a" e+ C3 M( D; R. d$ `3 G6 dwhat fierce orgy of slaughter ? 8 V* p: y6 z3 v. H7 f: W/ l: t; g, j
While the ghost of Crassus 8 p1 O$ ], D7 n$ ^3 ` }
still wandered unavenged, and it was your duty to
9 Q% `& |2 P: o/ {2 ?/ l3 B4 qrob proud Babylon of her trophies over Italy,
6 r) S/ d2 J Z7 M+ N( J' `did you choose to give to hated nations the spectacle of
/ T, S# n& a) q4 u( Q/ s8 gRoman bloodshed, and to wage wars that could win / n7 I; d- \* _
no triumphs ?- }0 a- X7 K$ q7 Z+ l4 `( x) M/ L
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